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She looks so pretty
in the sun rays of a blessed afternoon.
The breeze has a soft touch
on her skin of flawlessness.
Her voice is a Mozart sonata,
and for her the word perfect is an understatement.
We need sunglasses for the height of her radiance.
No one will look away;
she's cursed to be in the gaze of thousands.
But then my heart falls when I wake up from that dream.

Yes, none of that was real,
and pretending it is
is death.
I must change.

I turn the pages of my diary,
in hopes that writing in it will be
like a purification,
to everything that is within that I want to be without.


What I then wish for is to go on as myself,
and to see everything and everyone,
not with rose colored glasses,
but just as something with value;
in a word the truth.

The true beauty of life
is being who you are,
and being happy with who you are,
also to smile and mean it,
so smile and be your own sunshine.
Like "Waterfall Hope" I think I should have worked on this more, but I miss faves and comments!!:D I know, I gotta stop doing that, but here it is! I wrote this months ago and let it build up on my notebook.
Please comment!:)
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
this is really nice :clap:
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
Thank you!:hug:
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TheDarkenedBride Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very welcome :D
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2012
:hug:
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dweckie Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Student Writer
Beautiful; feels almost like two poems {the first stanza then the rest} :)
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angelichope Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
Thank you!:heart:
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thetanforever Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful.

There is alot that can be told and philosophised about this... :D
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angelichope Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
Thank you very much!:aww:

You really think so?!!:D Thank you again!:hug:
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thetanforever Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes, i think so. :)

Out there we are like gods, angels, and down here we wear various bodies like we wear clothes, :) and that is changing.
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angelichope Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2011
Thank you!:heart:
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